Poem: Bite Sized Attentiion

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Hook me with the story
get-go from the first page.
If it doesn't grab me
I don't want to be involved.


Flowery prose
from centuries past
The thread count of the dress
why does it matter?


Slow moving
build up to the climax
but if I can't relate to it
it puts me to sleep.


Entertain me
don't preach your morals
try to be too brilliant.
I close the book.

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